Outline:
Intro
Thesis: Technology can serve to actually harm humans rather then help them.
• Argument #1: Competition can lead to a negative effect of technology.
• Argument #2:Our dependence on technology is making us loss connection with the world around us.
• Argument #3: The easyness of technology is making us forget the negative effects it has on our society.
Conclusion
Matt,
ReplyDeleteYour outline provides a good preview of a good paper. I believe the topics you plan to expand when you write your paper are topics that are worth talking about. To me, you plan to kind of build up to your main ideas in your essay. First you plan to talk about competition with technology itself, which also introduces the source of your paper. Then for the rest of your paper, you plan to talk about our society's use of technology. Overall, I think your ideas are taking you on the right track. Good Luck on the paper.
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ReplyDeleteMatthew,
ReplyDeleteI like the thesis and all your arguments back up your thesis well. Really like the part of how going to talk about the negative aspects of technology. Think paper will be interesting but 2nd and 3rd kind of sound the same they both are like the negative effects. Maybe you couldtighten your arguments a bit but this a good start. hope i get a chance to read it.
strong outline, i get the big idea that you think that this while digital age is having a negative affect people. I can surly see this paper flow. I am benefiting off this because I have many ideas, but i need to organize them. Anyways your thesis is simple but poses an argument worth supporting. Can't wait to read the paper
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